Darkness
Apr 9th, 2008 by Fruit Punch
Ask me what’s the one thing I never regret
I’ll answer: It Was the day our eyes first met
Ask me why I picked you to be my only mate
I’ll answer: It was just a matter of random faith
Ask me what I see when looking your direction;
I’ll answer: Someone of my taste and selection
Ask me what I admire about you and your personality
I’ll answer: Your kindness, your charm, your generosity
Ask me what would I want if I was giving the chance of anything
I’ll answer: Your trust and honesty, I call my invisible ring
Ask me what’s my reason for being with you for so long
I’ll answer: The communication of our ship just keeps growing strong
Ask me what’s the limit of my love for you, as my lover and friend
I’ll answer: There isn’t any, it’s about the beginning and not the end
But Ask me what’s the one thing that you did to leave a visual mark
I’ll answer: Baby, It was the day you left me to bleed alone in the dark
You know how I feel,you know how I love
You know my strength as well as my weakness
So why would you…
Give it an honest answer…
Why would you hurt me the way you do, when
you know I’m deeply in love with you…
Yeahh!!
Big ups to my boobooloops Fruit Punch With her story of “Darkness”.
Sounding good! keep it up boo..everyone goes threw their own darkness life and thats why my gyal put it in her own words.
Take Care & Much Luc,
Lakeisha
ye lovin dis one self i see u really expressin urself in too .
my gyul ain makin no jokes self anyways ye love ya N/R 4 life
such a sad ending to love filled lines. just want to say this darkness shall pass, but what will matter is if you have learned the lessons that the darkness was bringing to you. i love the part about invisible ring…gal, you have it badd!!!!!! he is a lucky man…and i’m a woman saying that
Hey Fruit Punch,
Your poetry skills are off the chart, you write with sensitivity and much charisma. Only you can bring it in such a fashion that many will feel what you write.
You’ve got talent… keep up the writing.
Look within your heart, the answer is always right there, clouds of judgment leaves us thinking, your wise beyond your years and know how to turn any bad or painful situation around.
Don’t let nothing or no one bring you down… Be strong!
It’s very nice sweetie